Skin is definitely a little too harshly processed... pare it back about 15-20% and leave a little
more definition and then I think you've nailed it (talking the closeups here).
Watch the model vs light position... #1,4,5, and 7 all are underexposed or have hotspots where you don't want them (ie on her chest).
I think #3 is by far the strongest of the set in terms of lighting and composition. You've given her a really flattering definition in her face, and the only thing I can think of for critique would be that there needs to be a little more light in her eyes. Getting a reflector or something below her would help fill the shadows a bit more and bring it to the top-notch level
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