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PostPosted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:15 pm 
hi everyone

I thought I'd share my first b&w pictures with u guys ... Hope u like it ... Feel free to comment and plz give advice i am a beginner
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2011 6:34 am 
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hi mody20E

I'm not the best at giving critique, so bear with me, and this is just my personal opinion.

Good tones to the conversion, but I think the focus point is off. Really it should be on the eye and eyelashes rather than the nose. This would result in a slightly blurred nose, so perhaps stopping down slightly would help. You would still get the drop off from the focal plane to the ear and shoulder.

Compositionally I think the right hand side could be slightly cropped out to 10x8 or square format.


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 4:42 pm 
From a begginer: I'd make the depth-of-field not so shallow. Maybe more one or two stops in the f number.


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