I kinda like the last two within the limits of your shooting position. But they look slightly blurry, motion blur? Would be better if its avoidable.
I think it's a case of an unstable tripod/not using a remote release/mirror lock up.
The images lack impact, and that's down to the composition. Try getting closer to the action and capturing blurs right up front. I have an example here
that uses a wide angle to create a convergence point in terms of composition.
Hi Popo & Photoj
Thanks for the valuable Comment, I know I don't perform well very it is just my first attempt . Yeah I do noticed there is a slight blur is because of the tripod leg are easily shaken due strong wind, by the night time it is very rainy & windy so I have take it from high building but I wasn't satisfied at all, If it is not Rainy & windy , My actual composition should be close enough to frame the road & the car. *Sigh* Wish was a good clear night , It was badly rain due the phenomena of La Nina Season. I don't have the remote shutter release yet & by that I was use timing release about 2 Sec.
@Photoj- Thanks for sharing the good example of light trail picture.
I will try again in some other night & Hope not will rain again!