Hi ritchievalens,
May I wish you a warm welcome to the CameraLabs forum.
Interesting photo but I find it difficult to look at.

Depth of field is too extreme for me with not even the whole head in sharp focus. Central placement and a distracting background don't work for me either but those are all very personal views and not only may others more artistically literate than I find a lot to like but the effects I describe may be exactly what you wanted.
So please don't take my thoughts too seriously. Don't forget our monthly
On Assignment competition.
Bob.