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 Post subject: Anogira Lady
PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 3:00 pm 
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Comments and critique welcome, if you have time.

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If you placed the subject a bit more out of center, cropped a bit of the bottom of the image out and perhaps sharpened it a little less, it would do wonders I think!

Otherwise, very nice - and also, a black and white version maybe?

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i agree black and white...with a lot of burn....

should be awesome.

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i'd like to say hello to poor bokeh(door frame in focus), burns on hair, and bad composition. You have a good model, all you need now is good place, light and some skills with you can pic up reading some Gordon's txt. And like guys said B&W somehow, sometimes it works well with older people :)


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Hm..I'll have to disagree about the compostition part of magic's reply, it would be perfect if only you met the other two, background and b/w. Although the b/w is a personal taste thing, it would go perfect with this shot...all in all, I think the composition is nice!
Maybe you could even blur the shot in PS? Dunno..

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Many thanks for all your comments.

I've had another go - cropped and made B/W. Not sure what is meant by 'more burn', though !

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Nice job.

Check out this tutorial: Dodging and Burning in Photoshop

http://www.dpchallenge.com/tutorial.php?TUTORIAL_ID=30

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Many thanks - I'll check that tutorial.

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I disagree with the out of centre remark, the rule of thirds does not apply when you have such a strong image.....

Centre image crop and and turn to monochrome = PERFECT!

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I like this one alot better with the B&W, cropped...and the closeness denotes an intimacy...a closer look at this girl who has a little stand-offish look to her...so, to my eye, for whatever reason, I like the way she is placed in this B&W study. I hope that you will take this photo and do what Mitchell says, with the burn tutorial..and then re-post. Would be fun to see how it turns out...

great subject, and a really nice capture, too

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[$0.02]Personally I think that if you want to go the monochrome way Sepia would be the preferred choice. It softens the rather harsh contrast and gives it a warmer tone.[/$0.02]

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