1- Not particularly fond of this shot - she's in mid word/mid laughing, I find this takes away from the shot. Also, I'd crop the dead space on the right side out.
2- I see what you were trying to do here, but I don't particularly like it. The pose seems a bit too forced for my liking. Framed nice however.
3- Cute shot for a couple of 4 year olds - not an engaged couple.
4- This I like - it's a good expression on both of their faces and the slight tilt gives a fun feel to the photo. It looks candid enough to be convinced as an actual candid.
5- Fantact shot - I love it. I've come back to this one a few times and it puts a smile on my face every time. Great creativity. Well done. 5 Star.
6- One of your better of the set. I like that her eye shadow matches her dress. The photo is framed very well with nice lines. Good perspective as well. I like it.
7- Factastic shot again - The moving train gives a sense of curiosity to the viewer. Technically speaking the highlights are a little blown out, but other than this, I'd call it a 5 star.
8- This is a really cute one as well. The DoF is enough to make the subjects pop, but not so much as to loose detail in the background. Nice lighting directions. I like that the rule of thirds applies to the lady, cause lets face it, weddings are all about the bride
9- Mediocre - I'm sure some would comment on the fact they eyes are on different things. If they were both staring off into the distance, I really wouldn't like it. I feel like they should be both facing the camera, but if this were the case, I wouldn't be blown away by photo. Typical headshot.
10- There you go, that's a nice once. The highlights might be a bit blown out here again. Well framed and nice DoF for this style. I'd call it a 3.5 star.
11- I'm a fan of outdoor flashing, but I don't like the whole sitting in a tree thing.
12- Again, I see what you were trying to do, but I don't like the product. Perhaps if they were sitting down maybe? I dunno, I'll think about it and come back to this one.
Nice work bud, look forward to seeing more of your work!