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 Post subject: Ms. Maricar
PostPosted: Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:21 am 
Model: Maricar Diaz

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:17 am 
Musta!

1. This image seems to be underexposed, maybe a bit less than a stop under.

There's loss of detail under her right ear, if this were to be considered for a magazine cover that would be a dealbreaker.

there's some wrinkles to the left of her armpit. this is a glamour portrait, you should try to make your model look as good as possible- remove this wrinkle like you would a pimple on her face.

her lips convey a message but her eyes a putting out a different one. I'm not sure what to think.


2. Better exposed than the first image.

Same loss of detail in the hair. bump up the fill light for these.

there's a harsh shadow being cast by the tungsten light on camera left.

her tummy seems to hang over her waist, you might want to edit these out.

Her head is straight up, but her body is bent and curved slightly. again- two different messages.


glamour portraits require editing almost all the time. make yourself look better than anyone else with a camera and you'll master your art.


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 6:46 am 
salamat kababayan.

thanks for your comments and suggestions.
these are well noted.

salamat ulit. :D


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